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Old 10-30-2004, 11:21 PM   #1
sumitdharamsi
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My first ever attempt at writing.. Please post your comments..

"Yaad to bohot aate hain,
par hum jataate nahi..
Dil ka dard kisiko bataate nahi..
Akele mein aansu bahaa lete hain,
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